From b9ca5def9e8f53f4e852f83c34c5d93947f6655d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lyn Perrine Date: Tue, 7 Jan 2020 19:49:17 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Reduce Wordiness --- source/3/3.2/3.2.3/brightness.rst | 2 +- source/3/3.2/3.2.4/date_and_time.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/3/3.2/3.2.3/brightness.rst b/source/3/3.2/3.2.3/brightness.rst index f780b5ff..85aba05e 100644 --- a/source/3/3.2/3.2.3/brightness.rst +++ b/source/3/3.2/3.2.3/brightness.rst @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Brightness is the default tool to control your screen brightness. If you are usi Usage ------ -To use brightness click on the dial towards the right window of the window. To make the screen dimmer use the :kbd:`left arrow` key or click on the dial and drag the dial towards the left. If you want to make the screen more bright press the :kbd:`right arrow` key or drag the dial towards the right. The name of your display(s) will be on a dial on the center. After doing this you will be asked to confirm the current brightness is OK while needing to select :guilabel:`Yes`. If you do not respond it will revert the old brightness which is useful because if you made your screen illegible it will revert to the old settings. +To use brightness click on the dial towards the right window of the window. To make the screen dimmer use the :kbd:`left arrow` key or click on the dial and dragnight the dial towards the left. If you want to make the screen more bright press the :kbd:`right arrow` key or drag the dial towards the right. The name of your display(s) will be on a dial on the center. After doing this you will be asked to confirm the current brightness is OK while needing to select :guilabel:`Yes`. If you do not respond it will revert the old brightness which is useful because if you made your screen illegible it will revert to the old settings. .. image:: brightness-confirmation.png diff --git a/source/3/3.2/3.2.4/date_and_time.rst b/source/3/3.2/3.2.4/date_and_time.rst index e7e81c0e..b2654fa5 100644 --- a/source/3/3.2/3.2.4/date_and_time.rst +++ b/source/3/3.2/3.2.4/date_and_time.rst @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ Chapter 3.2.4 Date and Time =========================== -Date and time is a program that lets you change your timezone toggle whether to get the time automatically and change the time and date manually if you are not connected to a network. +Date and time is a program that changes your timezone and toggle whether to get the time automatically and change the time and date manually if you are not connected to a network. Usage ------